PLEASE HELP!! My instructor graded my Introduction (IMR) paper, and I received a

PLEASE HELP!!
My instructor graded my Introduction (IMR) paper, and I received
a 74% due to multiple mistakes. This is
the first part of the final synthesis paper. So the paper needs to be edited in
a scholarly manner. I have included the graded paper with the instructor’s
comments that need to be fixed. The 5 articles being used for the synthesis
project, my methods, and the Matrix table( are included at the end of my paper). Along with the grading rubric. I also included two other articles that I used to get some infromation from for my paper.
My PICO question that was approved: Does the method of
breastfeeding (I) or bottle feeding(C) among infants (P) influence the
incidence of ear infections (O) during the first year of life (T)?
My Abstract was not even close to being correct! It was not
required but was preferred because it is required in the final paper.
APA 7 MUST BE FOLLOW STRICTLY FOLLOWED!!
I have listed 12 sources just because that is what was used in the orignal paper. There must be 5 sources at least ( the 5 articles used for the project listed in the matrix and attached ) but the rubic does not say anything about 12 references being a requirement.

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