B540 Haines Draft (Module 2) B540 HAINES DRAFT 2 REQUIREMENT NOTE: The paper for revision is attached. Please see below for instructions. Also, I have attached other documents. Professor Response: Introduction The thesis is missing, work on developing one that is argumentative to support the entire paper. Thesis is the last sentence of the introduction paragraph and is present in the conclusion. Body The Haines paper is an argumentative paper. What does that mean? Must be debatable and must supply other perspectives that are opposite of your opinion. An argumentative research paper consists of an introduction in which the writer clearly introduces the topic and informs the audience exactly which stance the writer intends to take; this stance is often identified as the thesis statement. The Haines is an argumentative essay, so you need an opposing view. The required pages are present and met the length for this draft. Lastly, ensure you utilize transition sentences from one paragraph to another level 1 heading. References You provided the minimum Resources required. On track Make the recommended changes and you are on track to commence the next draft. Professor.